{"id":980,"date":"2011-11-15T13:10:38","date_gmt":"2011-11-15T21:10:38","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/irenejackson.com\/songblog\/?p=980"},"modified":"2013-06-28T13:34:57","modified_gmt":"2013-06-28T21:34:57","slug":"great-song-mediocre-lyrics","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"http:\/\/irenejackson.com\/songblog\/great-song-mediocre-lyrics\/","title":{"rendered":"Great Song, Mediocre Lyrics"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>I was working out a song for a guitar student by a British artist named Jamie Cullum called &#8220;All At Sea&#8221;, when I discovered a gem. I liked &#8220;All At Sea&#8221;, but it&#8217;s written for piano so translating it to guitar is a bit of a challenge, and some chords just do not translate well. I decided to explore Cullum&#8217;s repertoire and I came across one that I just loved called &#8220;I&#8217;m All Over It&#8221;.<\/p>\n<p>I enthusiastically worked it out just for my own pleasure&#8230;not an easy song to play by any means. Cullum is considered somewhat of a jazz-pop artist, and his jazz influences certainly come out in his writing. His first releases were mostly jazz standard covers but he began throwing in the occasional self-penned song by his second and third albums. By his fourth album &#8220;Catching Tales&#8221;, the majority of the songs were original. The song &#8220;I&#8217;m All Over It&#8221; was co-written with Ricky Ross and appears on his fifth album &#8220;The Pursuit&#8221;.<br \/>\n<!--more--><br \/>\nIn examining the song further I realized the lyrics, outside of the title phrase &#8220;I&#8217;m All Over It&#8221;, are really not all that brilliant. Now, if you have read even a few of my articles, you&#8217;ll know that I almost always say there&#8217;s no excuse for poor or less-than-quality lyrics! So am I contradicting myself here? I don&#8217;t think so. Imagine if this terrific song had had terrific lyrics too!<\/p>\n<p>Here are the lyrics:<\/p>\n<p><em>Hello innocence, though it seems like we\u2019ve been friends for years<br \/>\nI&#8217;m finishing, how I wish I had never begun<br \/>\nThough it should be the last one<br \/>\nAnd it&#8217;s dragging me down to my knees<br \/>\nWhere I&#8217;m begging you please<br \/>\nLet me go, don\u2019t you know<\/em><\/p>\n<p><em>CHORUS:<\/em><br \/>\n<em> I&#8217;m all over it now<\/em><br \/>\n<em> And I can&#8217;t say how glad I am about that<\/em><br \/>\n<em> I&#8217;m all over it now<\/em><br \/>\n<em> Cause I worked and I cursed and I tried<\/em><br \/>\n<em> And I said I could change and I lied<\/em><br \/>\n<em> Well there&#8217;s something still moves me inside<\/em><\/p>\n<p><em>She&#8217;s a melody, that I\u2019ve tried to forget but I can\u2019t<\/em><br \/>\n<em> It still follows me<\/em><br \/>\n<em> When I wake in the dead of the night<\/em><br \/>\n<em> And I know that I can&#8217;t find<\/em><br \/>\n<em> That song going round in my head<\/em><br \/>\n<em> Like the last things you said<\/em><br \/>\n<em> Please don&#8217;t go you think I know<\/em><\/p>\n<p><em>[repeat CHORUS]<\/em><\/p>\n<p><em>BRIDGE:<\/em><br \/>\n<em> No I won&#8217;t come back<\/em><br \/>\n<em> No I won&#8217;t come back<\/em><br \/>\n<em> No I won&#8217;t come back<\/em><br \/>\n<em> No I won&#8217;t come back<\/em><br \/>\n<em> One dark morn-in\u2019 she left without a war&#8211;ning<\/em><br \/>\n<em> And took the red-eye back to London town<\/em><\/p>\n<p><em>LAST CHORUS:<\/em><br \/>\n<em> I&#8217;m all over it now<\/em><br \/>\n<em> I&#8217;m all over it now<\/em><br \/>\n<em> I&#8217;m all over it now and I can\u2019t say how glad I am about that<\/em><br \/>\n<em> I&#8217;m all over it now<\/em><br \/>\n<em> Cause I worked and I cursed and I tried<\/em><br \/>\n<em> And I said I would change but I lied<\/em><br \/>\n<em> Well there&#8217;s something still moves me inside&#8230;<\/em><\/p>\n<p>The most blatant problems are that he changes person (from &#8220;you&#8221; to &#8220;she&#8221;), he uses old tired phrases like &#8220;down to my knees&#8221; and &#8220;begging you please&#8221;, and he uses disconnected ideas &#8220;please don&#8217;t go, you think I know&#8221;. \u00a0It&#8217;s classified as pop\/jazz, so essentially you have pop lyrics over a jazz\/pop melody\/chord progression. \u00a0And we all know that &#8220;pop&#8221; doesn&#8217;t always go much deeper than&#8230;well, pop.<\/p>\n<p>Are lyrics important? This is a question that comes up time after time with many songwriters, and I think the main reason people question it is because there are so many songs that have pretty mediocre lyrics and are all about music and\/or production. Oh, and a popular artist helps too :-).<\/p>\n<p>But a lot of people love songs with mediocre lyrics, not BECAUSE of them but IN SPITE of them. When I was a kid growing up, we couldn&#8217;t HEAR a lot of lyrics for many songs on the radio because recordings were bad and the radios we heard them on weren&#8217;t much better. But the point was that we didn&#8217;t care! We mumbled the lyrics we couldn&#8217;t hear and didn&#8217;t know and loved them anyway. And the ones we could hear were not scrutinized very closely either. We rarely questioned what a song was really about. And that hasn&#8217;t changed much through to my kid&#8217;s generation.<\/p>\n<p>&#8220;I&#8217;m All Over It&#8221; is a break up song. \u00a0And in spite of my lyrical criticism, I love it.<\/p>\n<p>So what do you think?<br \/>\n<em>IJ\u00a0<\/em><\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>I was working out a song for a guitar student by a British artist named Jamie Cullum called &#8220;All At Sea&#8221;, when I discovered a gem. I liked &#8220;All At Sea&#8221;, but it&#8217;s written for piano so translating it to guitar is a bit of a challenge, and some chords just do not translate well. 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